Friday May 19/17

Today I’m going to introduce you to Hamlet. We’re going to do this by considering the question: Why do people still care about Hamlet?

In small groups (you will each have a chromebook) I want you to explore the following resources, take notes, and try to see if you can come with an answer to the above question.

1) Guardian Article: This article was written in response to Benedict Cumberbatch’s performance of Hamlet, but it is a historical look at the way different actors have approached the role.

2) #Hamlet: Do a search on twitter for the hashtag Hamlet and see what you come up with? How are people referencing Hamlet in their everyday lives?

3) David Tennant on why Shakespeare still matters.

4) Patrick Stewart on how Shakespeare works on camera.

5) Benedict Cumberbatch on Hamlet. (It’s long; don’t watch the whole thing.)

6) Rory Kinnear on Hamlet.

7) Hamlet on Film

 

 

Thursday May 18/17

Last day for the in-class essay.

Tips:

Make sure you follow proper MLA formatting. This is what your essay should look like. Use parenthetical citations not footnotes or end notes.

Don’t use a cover page

DO use a Works Cited page if you cited sources.\

DO have an effective title.

Don’t make your title: Persuasive essay Assignment or Marijuana or a;lskd;alskb

Don’t freak out. Look at this tiny baby sloth:

via GIPHY

 

 

Today is the first day of our in-class essay. You’ll have three days. The essay type and topic are your choice but the maximum word count will be 1000 words. I am looking for you to do the following:

  • Demonstrate excellent knowledge and understanding of chosen essay format
  • Excellent supporting details for each point with clear explanation. No logical fallacies.
  • Minimal errors in spelling, grammar, verb tense, and punctuation. Essay demonstrates proper MLA format. Ideas are organized and expressed clearly and sufficiently.
  • Demonstrate sophisticated application of the specific techniques of chosen essay format
  1. Once you’ve got a Chromebook, log into your gotvdsb account. Check your email for an invitation to Google Classroom. If you don’t have an invitation, you can sign up using the code: v78xjb
  2. Instructions are there once you sign in.

Monday May 15/17

Hi folks,

As you know, your CCA thesis statements are due for approval today and I’m asking you to submit them online. On Friday I suggested using Remind and so if you’ve already done that, great! But if you haven’t submitted your thesis statement to me, could you please do so by filling out the following form? If it doesn’t show up for you, go ahead and send it to me on Remind

You have this period to use as a work period for your CCA essays. I want to remind you about these handouts which you got on May 1:

Literature-Circle-Culminating-Activity-2017

How to Write a Comparative Analysis 2014

Comparative Essay organizer 2014

How to Generate a Good Thesis Statement 2014

Please use your time well. I get frustrated when students tell me they don’t have enough time to complete an assignment and then I see them spending the period talking about their prom plans or texting. Let’s use our personal devices effectively:

If you’re having trouble, or have questions that I or one of your peers might be able to help you with, please post it in this chat:

http://today.io/1q9Qr

I don’t think this needs to be said but just in case, please be respectful in this chat. Please use your first name and last initial as your username.  I will be monitoring this from my meeting.

Wednesday May 10/17

Today is our final literature circle meeting. Your focus for this meeting should be your CCA essay topics. Please remember, you have a thesis statement due for approval next week.

Monday May 8

Logos, Pathos, and Ethos

Methods of persuasion can be classified using the classical terms: logos, pathos, and ethos. When Aristotle coined these terms he was referring to speakers, but for the sake of argument here, we’ll talk about how these apply to writers.

Have a look at this video explaining logos, pathos, and ethos:

Consider the following print advertisement for Coke:

This ad is using ethos by using the nicknames for Prince William and Kate Middleton (As a side note, this is a bit sneaky because Coke is implying that the royal couple is endorsing their product without actually getting an endorsement). They are also using pathos by appealing to the general public’s excitement over the birth of the couple’s first baby. There is no appeal to logos in this advertisement. Modern advertisements rarely use logos.

Why do you think advertisers rely more on ethos and pathos than logos?

Your job now is to revise your essay of argument outline, incorporating examples of logos, pathos, and ethos. Be prepared to explain how this version of your essay is a persuasive essay rather than an essay of argument.

Questions and analysis notes for Science and Beauty are due tomorrow (if you’re submitting them).

Tomorrow will be a CCA/final literature circle work period.

Friday May 5/17

We’ll begin today with a note on the persuasive essay, then we’ll do a pre-reading exercise by responding to the following poem by Walt Whitman:

When I heard the learn’d astronomer,

When the proofs, the figures, were ranged in columns before me,

When I was shown the charts and diagrams, to add, divide and measure them,

When I sitting heard the astronomer where he lectured with much applause in the lecture-room,

How soon unaccountable I became tired and sick,

Till rising and gliding out I wander’d off by myself In the mystical moist night-air, and from time to time.

Look’d up in perfect silence at the stars.

Take a few moments and consider the degree to which you agree or disagree with the sentiment expressed in this poem and why. Jot down a few ideas and then we’ll share ideas in a four corners discussion.

Next you will read the essay “Science and Beauty” by Isaac Asimov and complete some analysis notes and discussion questions.

The questions and analysis notes are due Tuesday. (This is optional but if you missed questions for the narrative essay or essay of argument I highly recommend this.)

Wednesday May 3/17

Picture this: you’re graduating from university and you’re sitting with your classmates listening to an inspirational speech given by the dean of medicine about his never-ending quest for knowledge. It’s a great speech, but something about it doesn’t sound quite right. You get the eerie feeling you’ve heard this before. You get out your smart phone and google a strange phrase that you just heard the dean use and suddenly, there’s his whole speech! You’re reading along word for word! But, here’s the catch: the speech wasn’t written by him.This is exactly what happened at the University of Alberta in 2011. You can read the full story here. The dean of medicine ended up resigning his post.

Clearly academic dishonesty has major consequences, but even university professors have been tempted to do it. If you have a look at this article in Wikipedia, you’ll see many famous examples of academic dishonesty. The consequences of being found guilty of academic dishonesty (or plagiarism) can vary depending on the context. You could receive a zero on an assignment, be expelled from a school, or possibly be fired (or be asked to resign) from your job.

But why? Think about why being found guilty of plagiarism can have such serious consequences. Why would the dean in the above story be asked to resign? It was just a speech. It wasn’t an academic paper. Why does it matter? Keep these questions in mind. You’ll return to them later.

What is Plagiarism?

Here’s where things get tricky. Different institutions have slightly different definitions of plagiarism:

Example Icon Definition #1

The Council of Writing Program Administrators defines plagiarism as:

“In an instructional setting, plagiarism occurs when a writer deliberately uses someone else’s language, ideas, or other original (not common-knowledge) material without acknowledging its source.”

“Defining and Avoiding Plagiarism: The WPA Statement on Best Practices.” Council of Writing Program Administrators. 16 Feb. 2015. <http://wpacouncil.org/positions/WPAplagiarism.pdf>.

Example Icon Definition #2

“Three different acts are considered plagiarism:

failing to cite quotations and borrowed ideas,

failing to enclose borrowed language in quotation marks, and

failing to put summaries and paraphrases in your own words” (570).

Hacker, Diana. The Bedford Handbook. 5 th ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s. 1998.

Example Icon Definition #3

 

The University of Toronto’s code of behavior defines plagiarism as follows:

It shall be an offence for a student knowingly:

(d) to represent as one’s own any idea or expression of an idea or work of another in any academic examination or term test or in connection with any other form of academic work, i.e. to commit plagiarism.

Wherever in the Code an offence is described as depending on “knowing”, the offence shall likewise be deemed to have been committed if the person ought reasonably to have known.

Procter, Margaret. “How Not to Plagiarize.” 16 Feb. 2015. <http://www.writing.utoronto.ca/advice/using-sources/how-not-to-plagiarize>

These definitions are all similar but there are subtle differences between each one. In the first example, the definition uses the word “deliberately.” This might lead you to believe that if you accidentally commit an act of plagiarism by forgetting to cite a source, or if you didn’t know a source needed to be cited, you’re not guilty of plagiarism; however, the third example adds a stipulation that it’s plagiarism if the person “ought reasonably to have known.” So you’re still on the hook even if you didn’t mean to do it.

The first example also mentions the idea of common knowledge. You do not have to cite something that is common knowledge. So what constitutes common knowledge? The Online Writing Lab (OWL) at Purdue University explains that something can be considered common knowledge if “you find the same information undocumented in at least five credible sources. Additionally, it might be common knowledge if you think the information you’re presenting is something your readers will already know, or something that a person could easily find in general reference sources.”

Academic Citation

One way to ensure you avoid accidental plagiarism is making sure you cite all your sources properly. Not only do you prevent unintentional plagiarism, you establish your own credibility as a responsible and ethical writer and researcher.

In English, instructors usually require students to use the Modern Language Association style guide, often simply referred to as MLA. However, different disciplines use other style guides such as APA or Chicago. Therefore, it’s not particularly helpful or necessary to memorize how to cite different sources using a specific style guide. What is useful, is knowing how to access and use a variety of different style guides.

The Most Common Style Guides

 
Style Guide Discipline Examples Resources
Modern Languages Association (MLA) English literature, art Online Writing Lab at Purdue University
American Psychological Association (APA) psychology, education The American Psychological Association
The Chicago Manual of Style (CMS) history, science The Chicago Manual of Style

 

You’ll notice that there is some overlap. Ultimately, your instructor will decide which style guide he or she wants you to use so if in doubt, ask.

When to Paraphrase, Summarize, and Quote

Paraphrases, summaries, and quotations are used to support—not replace—your own ideas.

Paraphrase: restatement of a portion text in your own words using approximately the same number of words for the purpose of helping the reader understand the meaning.

Summary: a shortened version of the text in your own words for the purpose of providing the reader with the essential understanding of a source.

Quotation: a repetition of someone’s exact words for the purpose of using someone else’s words to support or illustrate your ideas, analyzing another’s writing, or to point out an element in the writing.

The following examples all come from Williams College: Citing and Documenting online student resource.

You should use a quotation when specific words, or a phrase are essential to support the point you are making.

Example Icon Direct Quotation Example

Original

Buffy, a small, delicate-looking blonde of superhuman strength, relies on Giles not only for adult support and coaching, but also for the research necessary to do that for which the Vampire Slayer has been chosen.

Quote in Paper (MLA)

According to DeCandido, Buffy “relies on Giles not only for adult support and coaching, but also for the research necessary to do that for which the Vampire Slayer has been chosen” (44).

The full citation that would appear in the Works Cited page would be:

DeCandido, Graceanne A. “Bibliographic Good vs. Evil in Buffy the Vampire Slayer.”American Libraries Sept. 1999: 44-47. Print.

The student chose a direct quotation because the student felt the author’s exact words were important to convey the main idea. Notice how the student seamlessly weaves the quotation into his own text. He begins the sentence and uses the quotation to end it. Notice too how the student does not include the author’s last name in the parenthetical citation because he used it when introducing the quotation.

Summaries are helpful when you want to condense a large amount of information. You still need to put it in your own words. Focus on the details that help support your point and omit the ones that don’t.

Example Icon Summary Example

Original

Buffy, a small, delicate-looking blonde of superhuman strength, relies on Giles not only for adult support and coaching, but also for the research necessary to do that for which the Vampire Slayer has been chosen. In the third season, Giles was officially relieved from his Watcher duties, but he ignores that and continues as Buffy’s trainer, confidant, and father-figure.

Summary in Paper (MLA)

To help her fulfill her Slayer duties, Buffy can always turn to Giles (DeCandido 44).

The full citation that would appear in the Works Cited page would be:

DeCandido, Graceanne A. “Bibliographic Good vs. Evil in Buffy the Vampire Slayer.”American Libraries Sept. 1999: 44-47. Print.

In this case, the facts were important in terms of supporting the point the student was making, but the exact words were not, and he just wanted to include the most important facts. Notice how the student includes some of the details in his summary but ignores others. He is focusing on the details that help support his point.

Paraphrasing is a good idea when all of the ideas are important, but you don’t want to use a quotation and you want the language to sound like the rest of your essay. Paraphrasing can be tricky because you want to ensure that you capture all the key ideas, while still sounding like yourself. A good tip is to read the passage, cover it up, and then try to write the paraphrase in your own words without looking at it. Don’t just use a thesaurus to look up synonyms. It’s also important that you don’t change the meaning from what the author originally wrote. When you paraphrase, sometimes you need to use more words than the author because you need to explain complex concepts and ideas in a more understandable way.

Example Icon Paraphrase Example

Original

In the third season, Giles was officially relieved from his Watcher duties, but he ignores that and continues as Buffy’s trainer, confidant, and father-figure.

Paraphrase in Paper (MLA)

Despite his termination by the Watcher’s Council in season three, Giles persists to teach and counsel Buffy while playing a “father-figure” role (DeCandido 44)

The full citation that would appear in the Works Cited page would be:

DeCandido, Graceanne A. “Bibliographic Good vs. Evil in Buffy the Vampire Slayer.”American Libraries Sept. 1999: 44-47. Print.

Notice how the words, phrases, and even sentence structure are different from the original while still maintaining the original meaning. The student has put the words “father-figure” in quotation marks because it is a specific term used in the original, but even if he hadn’t used that quotation, he still would have needed the citation because the ideas are not his own.

 

External Video External Video

Watch this video explaining the difference between a summary, paraphrase, and direct quotation.

 

What does it mean to “cite” a source?

When you cite a source, you are giving credit to the person who created that source. Ideally, you want to make sure that the person reading your work can find the exact same source you used. In fact, sometimes the reader may want to know more, and actually find the source to read more about the area of research. This requires you to provide quite a bit of detailed information in a standardized format so that whenever anyone reads your work, or when you read theirs, there is a clear way of recognizing when others’ work is cited. Now, you don’t want that information to distract your reader from the points you’re trying to make so you usually cite your source in two ways:

  1. In the body of your paper, immediately after the quotation or idea you borrowed, using a shorter form of a citation. In English, you will usually use a parenthetical citation.
  2. At the end of your paper on a new page, using a longer, more detailed citation. In English, this is usually in a Works Cited page

When should you cite a source?

Any time you are using a quotation, fact, idea, or phrase that you didn’t come up with yourself, and that isn’t common knowledge, cite it.

Resources Icon Resources

  1. Purdue Online Writing Lab’s Is It Plagiarism Yet?
  2. The University of Toronto’s How Not to Plagiarize
  3. William’s College’s Citing and Documenting guide.

Citation Tools

There are a number of tools available online to help you cite your sources correctly; however, you will still need to refer to a style guide to confirm that the tool cited your source using the proper style.

Resources Icon Resources

  1. Bibme
  2. Citation Machine
  3. EasyBib is free for MLA formatting but you have to pay to use other style guides.

Tuesday May 2/17

Today we’ll start by taking up a couple of the questions from the narrative essay:

  1. Implied thesis: The thesis of Crozier’s essay is implied but it’s still very specific. It’s not “Alcoholism has negative affects on families.” It’s more like (and this is a direct quote from a student’s answers) “We are all looking for someone to be our other half and complete us even if they are destructive.” Essentially in this narrative essay, Crozier is looking to explain why she would repeat the same mistakes her mother made.
  2. “Drunk as a skunk” (question 5) is a simile, but it’s also a cliche and is said in a joking way, making light of someone’s intoxication. The way the mother uses it suggests that the father doesn’t really have a drinking problem. It undermines the seriousness of the situation. What does it tell us about Crozier’s mother and the society in which she lives? It tells us that her generation is not one that acknowledges alcoholism as a serious problem.
  3. Dionysian waters (question 9) The Dionysian waters represent passion, adventure, excess. These are all things she longs for after living the life as the responsible good daughter that she had to be as the result of being the child of an alcoholic parent. She has to fight between the urge to let go and the possibility that she may be consumed by this. She and her mother are weavers, trying to hold together the pieces her father and Patrick (the Dionysians) unravel. The need for balance.

The essay is very much about the push/pull of opposing forces in our lives and the challenge of striving for balance.

Your narrative essay outlines: Tell one story. Don’t give me an opinion and a bunch of examples.

Next we’ll read “On the Road to Berlin” and complete the questions as a class.

Then we will talk about the descriptive techniques the author uses and you will revise your paragraphs using some of those techniques.